Frage von musicmze:
Sooo ... Here is my first short film.
The film was shot in September 2009 with my best friends.
Since we need no script - the making of the story alone.
technique used:
Panasonic AG-DVC30
Eigenbau 35mm adapter, vibrating
Sachtler Tripod.
Edit: the whole exercise is rather to be regarded as competitive and of course, no movie.
I know that not long everything is perfect. Had myself a thousand points known to be correcting.
I am therefore happy about your criticism.
vg Martin
Antwort von Axel:
I know that not long everything is perfect. Had myself a thousand points known to be correcting. Because so little is left.
I am therefore happy about your criticism. Pleasant, easy buckig or K. Smith-ig.
Since we need no script - the making of the story alone. It is debatable whether you
need a script. Approximately 115 * years of experience (~ dawn of cinema), but show that you notice when writing a screenplay, whether you have a story or not ;-)))
(somewhat arbitrarily calculated from the Lumiere brothers, cinematography, 1895)
Antwort von rush:
moin ...
my skin's net now, so the stool ... finds rather tiring:)
only the moped received s.end liked ... the matters before it are probably more likely what insider or people of interest to know the boys ... :)
Antwort von PowerMac:
Laaaaaaaaaangweilich.
Antwort von JonasB:
Perhaps you ought to consider views on a script ... I can shoot my family at breakfast and it's interesting xD This is simply NOTHING ... I think that you can accept, because you reingesteckt no work.
The only criticism that can give you is simply: to invest more thought.
Other critique would anyway with the words: "Yes we would have more trouble clearly ..." be countered.
Hope you're feeling under attack now.
MFG
Jonas
Antwort von musicmze:
I have to say that I did not have a script (), therefore synonymous no idea about this, but simply just grabbed the camera and had losgefilmt.
So the whole for me is more of an exercise. I wanted to see what you can do so from the material.
But of course, thank you for the Critique
Antwort von JonasB:
I've thought so synonymous;) is not easy to master an art that ... Since the critique, one should rather concentrate on the rumgefilme since been stuck in there find a few thoughts. Find interressant which the actors play with the camera, cool style, it just does not fit the "type" of film, or had the nen sense? ;) If yes, what did you intend to?
Do thoughts about the future son knick-knacks such as Safttrinken. In your video, no more than a Lückfüller and then accentuated with a close-up. Pointless emphasize verrwirrt;)
Find synonymous, the narrator is a interressantes stylistic device, but unfortunately, again without the background, right? He says things which one would like to combine, where they will verrarscht but in the end ^ ^
MFG
Jonas
PS Is not at that you see the edges of the 35mm adapter. Had synonymous can zoom out in the mail ...
Antwort von musicmze:
I had some ideas in mind, with whom I wanted to play) (the beginning of the film.
The whole "Outtakes" (second part of the movie), but had merely somehow synonymous with. So I reingebracht the narrator.
Overall, one can already say that I've just tried out a bunch of material to make something. So that at least walks in a little story.
The 35mm adapter is synonymous back in editing. Has not yet fitted with the zoom in the picture. Therefore the edges wegzumachen who had simply forgotten in the post.
As I said, is my first attempt at playing with the adapter.
