Frage von Mr. B:
Hi folks 
 I would now synonymous of something to show me to learn from the (; please constructive) criticism to be :-) 
 I am a newbie what the shooting is concerned, what is the (;) very short video looking at perhaps synonymous. In addition, you can hear s.meiner (; possibly slightly inappropriate for the video), voice, that I still belong to the later semesters. 
 Look after me so if I had not brought Hollywoodproduktin to pass:-D 
 I'm coming more from the 3D-corner, and now wanted to combine film and 3D animation. At the sound of the video is about the modeling up to the "acting" all created yourself. 
 The video is deliberately and quietly somber gehlaten, but I hope that makes it still fun to look at it.  
Here's my very short movies "Contact"  (; Would synonymous glad) to positive reviews on Youtube  
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 Antwort von  B.DeKid:

Is doch schon mal nen Start 
 If you distribute them on the lawn tennis balls, or can you put on HolsStaebchen scenes in "tracking" so you can get more movement into the whole. 
 If you take 200 + Euros in hand you can buy from and TerraGen Stillimage frames aka photos you created landscapes in 3D and also combine this with the original footage. 
 So You can then tinker a lot more tricks. 
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 With the light and the lens reflexes you need to play more "so that all the talk get a realistic look - Less is More 
 MfG 
 B. DeKid 
 PS: nen on 5min.com you find some more tutorials show you sollche matters.
 Antwort von  Mr. B:

Thanks for the tips :-) 
 With the light and the lens reflexes you need to play more "so that all the talk get a realistic look - Less is More 
 Yes, my lens flares have been criticized already in another forum. Can you give me a tip how I can better address it? 
 I would like (they keep in there in any case, I was advised rauszunehmen them, but they belong to the concept of the video:-D).
 Antwort von  B.DeKid:

With what you create? 3Dmaxs Cinema4D or Maya 
 For me, the standard for C4D - Artifact and C4D Light / lens effects look 
 MfG 
 B. DeKid
 Antwort von  Mr. B:

 For me, the standard for C4D - Artifact and C4D Light / lens effects look  C4D is guessed correctly and got the lens effect, however, revised, is therefore not reflective of the standard.
 Antwort von  B.DeKid:

Yes because you still need nen bissel play with the settings as motion blur and so far 
 The reflexes slow down and let synonymous via key light up only briefly 
 MfG 
 B. DeKid 
 Only 2 days before the game about black background with those views and pack synonymous with this noise and fractal perturbations which is then much better
 Antwort von  Mr. B:

Ok thanks, had never previously used stop lens flares, there still needs to practice :-)
 Antwort von  B.DeKid:

Is ok you could see that yes, now it's playing s.das ... ps I have almost 1 1 / 2 years only in C4D with light is played as a "toy Horny" is properly used as much as it can .... you truly are hours, days, months, dealing with .... to make it short 
 Much combine (; of planes with alpha) 
 A lot of time working with transitions 
 Much with fractals / noise things work (; animated) 
 And LESS IS MORE A LOT of them but right ;-) 
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 Footage should always be 1 1 / 2 to 2 stops too bright because we have different layers with the Picture darkens .... PLEASE render all layers separately and then eventually merge. 
 Fine adjustment can be good in AE s.Schlussmachen is not so intense as to make it render in C4D too. 
 MfG 
 B. DeKid