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1. kurzfilm: konstruktive kritik erbeten

1. shortfilm: constructive criticism welcome



Frage von dustdancer:
Januar 2008

moin together,

first anticipated, I'm only last winter to shoot short films came, so now not expected meisterwerk;).

This film is then within 33 hours competition. The theme was: "and where were you when the fun stopped." dehalb is synonymous story not quite as deep as it is for me very nicely happig was rotated script and cut the time to create.

the video because I was quite nice, I have yet another competition entries, a very small, of a local newspaper.
i love you

I would love to hear from criticism, the next brings me look insane.
if you a small video synonymous nor should have fallen, it could indeed synonymous still vote for it, but that's secondary.



Antwort von Tino8:

Hmm
So somehow ill with this disease is not as effective as shooting Lynch (because there simply well done) but rather langweillig.
Sure you've tried from DV to make the best, but somehow love is the theme issue of youths uniteresant completely for most viewers.



Antwort von B.DeKid:

"Tino8" wrote:
.... but somehow, the topic of young love problem completely uniteresant for most viewers.


Oh yes, and explain how you then as The Blue Lagoon, La Boom - the fats or Titanic .... looool





Antwort von AndyZZ:

"B. DeKid" wrote:
"Tino8" wrote:
.... but somehow, the topic of young love problem completely uniteresant for most viewers.


Oh yes, and explain how you then as The Blue Lagoon, La Boom - the fats or Titanic .... looool


Well, The Blue Lagunge and La Boom are almost 30 years old, because there were no computers in the children's bedrooms and Movies could still afford.
Titanic is synonymous already 10 years old. And so was now werbemäßig gepuscht without end, at least 3 h was said and of course the sensation synonymous horniness of people (ship goes under, over 3000 dead! Lechz!).



Antwort von Andreas_Kiel:

"Tino8" wrote:
Hmm, that is somehow ill,

What do you ask it, "sick" to be? The basic story was, moreover, ever filmed. At that time, the protagonist could not be separated mother of ...

"Tino8" wrote:
Sure you've tried from DV to make the best,

With the video format has nothing to do.

"Tino8" wrote:
But somehow love is the theme issue of youths completely uniteresant for most viewers.

I do not know how you did this enlightened knowledge, but it is wrong. Show you the times when the eve-soaps, which are private and the ÖR have an audience of millions with it.

The clip, which is relevant here, of which would most likely be rejected because he is not in the weichgespülte Dauerk * cke à la Marienhof reinpaßt. For the time pressure under which he is established, very successful. There's probably a longer synonymous film drin.

"Titanic": there was neither a youth, but adults, and there are 3,000 people is not synonymous with the ship perished. To the Kewl-Speak Group: LOL stands for "Laughing Out Loud," So You stotterst with "looool" "Laughing Out Out Out Out Loud" ;-)

BG, Andreas



Antwort von Axel:

Love film?
We have a different perception. My reaction is pure horror. Unsympatische people who are stuck in depressing neuroses. Synonymous But Kate and Leo would not be able to save, only to find that characters with Hair "bucket of water" and goatee "Fidel on his deathbed" already know to be casted. Your silly staring, its snorting nose wing, if he insists, "I love you." If it is not your intention was to create a repulsive film ...
"Timo8" wrote:
... love the theme issue of youths ...

If this is the love of young people are problems, then good night.



Antwort von AndyZZ:

"Andreas_Kiel" wrote:
"Titanic": there was neither a youth, but adults, and there are 3,000 people is not synonymous with the ship perished.
BG, Andreas


Hast recht: were about 1500.



Antwort von Sakas:

first thank you for the initial feedback.
if you could tell me more precisely what is good or bad to be synonymous, I can imagine anything more.
sache with the titanic, la boom times etc, I want out before, because yes I want feedback on my work have;).



Antwort von dustdancer:

sometimes you should log synonymous to answer;)



Antwort von Arthur:

Yes, your film has suggested for discussion, so he can examine the content was not bad.
The cut, the music and camera work is good. The cuts are there where you expected. The phrase ".. synonymous mother says ..." I would not be built twice. The sense was the first time clearly over.
The lighting is very nicely done. The mood of the "madness" of the feeling here is, we would have cut through some of the normals in the shot and food and back to normal can increase.

Otherwise succeeded. Good work.

Arthur



Antwort von Arthur:

Hab da mal network in very different movies found.
Here is a video self-School, "Examples for video productions"
from their home shows.

Please see the "clip" "Wedding" LOL

http://www.wroz-video.de/wroz-video/index.html

To be synonymous with something then you can be 550, - ¬ for a course paid.

* thigh knocking gröööhl ... ... ichschmeissmichweg *

The "company" would like to guestbook entries.

Arthur




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