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Frage von rfilms:
Oktober 2006

Hello, I wrote my latest movie times on the internet, and hope that its your friendly dazugebt mustard.
The sound is in the YouTube Compression somehow become asynchronously. But such is life.

Story:

This short film of a young man who, through a deed in his past, the mind and the color in his life loses. He lives in a dream world and comes only through the memories of his home in search of the real world back. But the color does not come back into his life and so he takes a serious decision.

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Get ready in advance, thank you for your comments.



Antwort von Supe:

RFilm Hello!

I have unwilkürlich after arte-logo in the movie Wanted. :-)

I think, though I really experimental art not so like the movie quite well. Especially the cut is well done. Whether you Gefühlswirrungen by the number of used, can represent different Effelte and should, I do not know. I would be a consistent color or Farbstufeneffekt preferred.

Why the friend finally seated in a wheelchair, but although the s.den a bottle, it is not affiliated, got head, I do not. And: A PPK has on the distance in any case, a wound leakage. Wär been synonymous späktakulär if the disc would have to break (air behind the actual film shooters). But as far as just my imagination ....

It's your film and of the basic idea and very well done cinematically well implemented.

How did the idea?

Gruß,
Supe



Antwort von flying.camera:

Hi, first of all thank you for your opinion.

Quote:
Why the friend finally seated in a wheelchair, but although the s.den a bottle, it is not affiliated, got head, I do not.


Well, actually it was a massive ashtray and thus he has a brain injury unfortunately get. The association was in the bed rather then for external injury, then in the final scene back healed, but the brain is still mud. (I know very Haarstreubend, but with a little imagination :-))

Quote:
Wär been synonymous späktakulär if the disc to rupture would be gone


I agree with you completely, but I think that would have given trouble. (Listed Location)

Quote:
How did the idea?


Good question, the film was for a Competition 13street rotated by the sender, and then the stop a little bit of psycho. (The film was unfortunately not taken)





Antwort von steveb:

I had an "open end" better liked, but liked the "technical" Implementing the better.

Unfortunately, however, loses the sense of the whole a little bit and one wonders what the author wanted us / filmmaker to say?



Antwort von rfilms:

First synonymous thank you for your comment.

Quote:
Unfortunately, however, loses the sense of the whole a little bit and one wonders what the author wanted us / filmmaker to say?


I hear not the first time. Is perhaps a little too complicated thought was of me.
My thought process was:
He has the color of his own life after he lost his buddy to cripple has beaten. The only solution to his color back, he sees in the killing of his buddies. When he has killed him then, although the color is back, but he can with his deed perpetrated not life (he has very quickly recognized ;-)) and kills himself



Antwort von rtzbild:

Not bad, so'n Psycho film ...

Have never with so what to do, but the effects and "noise" evidence already of a massive "Filmriss" of the protagonists.

LG Olli



Antwort von nico:

Quote:
..... he sees in the killing of his buddies. When he has killed him then, although the color is back, but he can with his deed perpetrated not life (he has very quickly recognized ;-)) and kills himself


Again, I wonder again, why first works, experimental films, etc. of newcomers always killings and horror relating to have? Is there really nothing else in the world, what would be in a film to be treated?

If you registered, how the secret of our younger generation are increasingly moving to this level, you need to really do not even have running amok and other headgear s.Schulen ill be surprised that with their perversion in the public press.



Antwort von soahC:

find the idea of the film very cool, the implementation naja. So the actor is really not bad, I find that section of the ton and are synonymous very successful. However, if I do not read the story would, I would have probably less understood or interpreted differently. The story is therefore already somewhere on the route ...

@ Nico: Well, I am almost exclusively for such films (Psycho Horror + stuff). Also, I read only those books synonymous (synonymous and non-fiction novels about such subjects), and on top of games I even like Killerspiele (yes, I like it when a lot of blood flows, that is for me to his good shooter, movie or book about this! ). As you of something, but on the personality of someone close to me will probably always remain a mystery! Something I really can not understand. I wonder when such thoughts are here the head is sick ...



Antwort von JoeFX:

RFilms Hi!
In the story I am of the opinion of SoahC. The film is the plot according to somehow wildly confused geschnitten. A bsschen Verwirrspielchen as in major Hollywood films, finally, the salt in the soup. Too much salt is synonymous not good. If you read the scene in a longer movie would fit, would the film scene as a real good look.
Only, I find the end a little bit funny. Why does he kill his friend, just so he can kill himself. The results with the color somehow makes no sense ...
The Effects I find good, the intermediate section has exactly fit. Somehow, as in "Death Dads".

MFG JoeFX

PS: The logo is a bit too long, when everything with the R and! would go faster, it gives the film a little more next tempo;)



Antwort von RFilms:

Thanks for your comments.
Yes, the story in the film does not quite come across is probably been settled but as I said on average it does not change, so I have to stop again and again to write.

At the end, it was thought that he shoots his buddy to the color in his life to find and then but at the same time notes that with the debt he can not live without. Had to somehow stop the pace of the film fit.

I sehs s.besten as a technology exercise. And you know it's practice exercises.



Antwort von AndyZZ:

"nico" wrote:

Again, I wonder again, why first works, experimental films, etc. of newcomers always killings and horror relating to have? Is there really nothing else in the world, what would be in a film to be treated?


I think it is easier to shoot something. A good comedy or a love story are certainly much more difficult to implement.



Antwort von Axel:

The film is cut wrong. Sorry, but we recognize the intention and the more the errors in the construction.
When Umschneiden there are still many options. Many flashbacks are (always) boring, that's the main mistake. The idea was probably a combination puzzle is stringent. But not only appears to me the end up and illogical.



Antwort von videozauber123:

Just found.

Like me. "Experimental" describes the whole very good. The cuts I like!

http://www.videocommunity.com to run a video contest relating to "Paint - color .."

maybe what your movie?



Antwort von Nio:

"nico" wrote:
... we really need is no longer running amok on s.Schulen and other headgear ill be surprised that with their perversion in the public press.


I sas s.jenem 6 December in Baden-Wuerttemberg in school ... About the mood in the class and among teachers can be more than just write books. When it dan at 10 clock s.der has knocked the door, I had the - I believe - horrible experience from school. The subsequent relief that there were only fifth-grader was the most beautiful s.diesem day. If someone really wants to make complicated film, let him try to catch this mood.

I do not play computer games, but I think that in such ringing both together: and derangement of the most influential games.
I was two years ago, times s.einen knife "smell". "Surprisingly," this boy plays (Can I publish the name?) Killerspiele.



Antwort von LaMisèreEnOr:

hi rfilms

erstmal: beautiful film, but he moved through the soundtrack is not as well-being

Tip: yes, I understand that youtube because of the large (potential) audience chooses, but the quali is grootig.

try it out veoh.com or www.stage6.divx.com, as you can see the movies then upload divx, without that you have to compress it in size.
In both cases, however, is a download of the videos available, I do not know what bothers you the

regards

Guram



Antwort von Eva Maier:

The intro has liked me, but other accounts so I garnicht start should perhaps be something to smoke.

/ E



Antwort von silvervideo:

Joa, is really quite cool. By the sound nervt halt something and the quality synonymous what could be better ... Well, youtube halt. Lad the film look in the video community (www.videocommunity.com) high.



Antwort von rfilms:

grateful for further comments. The film is now with syncron ton under www.rfilms.de / FDL / fdleng_.avi for download. (34Mb)



Antwort von ambrus:

The film is well made synonymous if it is not quite my taste.
Which program do you have a logo or header as you made the calls?



Antwort von rfilms:

With Photoshop I hingeschrieben belongings, and then with each change saved Picture. Later in the editing program just set everything in a row and finished isses.



Antwort von ALDIfreak:

the 30-intro 35seks ham for me personally would have disturbed .. synonymous shorter or faster can ..

s.sich the film was ok .. I actually hire from the perspective I show that he sees everything black and then outside of normal colors? .. so any other way to get out too late what is happening now ..

Otherwise, as I said quite nice

mfg



Antwort von Professor Hastig:

So I have now understood what is at stake. but the whole was synonymous one (Warning) bit boring.



Antwort von Hollinizer:

"Axel" wrote:
..... When Umschneiden are still many options. Many flashbacks are (always) boring, that's the main mistake. The idea was probably a combination puzzle is stringent. But not only appears to me the end up and illogical.


First of all, first congratulations for the excellent camera work. Subject of the storyboard, I would like constructive criticism and quoted above agree.

For me, the film first so:

1. Young man with boring office work stress (s / w)!
2. Think always s.die Frezeit with pals and (then) girlfriend (Color)
Wait a minute - in leisure is always alcohol in the game! What does this mean?
3. At the end of the scene with the Lashing out - OK then s / w for the loss of the girlfriend. It went with a buddy but still innocent enough - ashtray was not apparent.
4. Girlfriend skin from - it was synonymous oberpeinlich the matter.
4. Now suddenly friend in the hospital in a wheelchair and finally - murder of a friend = everything in Color. Man this is really sick. This would be nothing better. That is already in the direction of euthanasia such as "let us shoot all the disabled, it will be for the better." Steven Hawkins is faithfully: synonymous in a wheelchair can be a very fulfilling life - synonymous with nostalgia when one thinks s.andere alternatives.

5. Suicide - black --- well.

Had more of the story glaubhabt if the guy is like a ball into his own pear shoots without mates or to murder? From cutting her maybe something earlier point. The office scenes, one could s.ehesten rausscheißen because they are not on the actual target and distract hinstreben (work stress). Instead, perhaps somewhat more s / w of the type in private life after the event.



Antwort von Professor Hastig:

oh yes, with alcohol, I noticed synonymous.



Antwort von rfilms:

Thank you for your first weitreren comments.
Yes, the loved ones with the alcohol was actually quite funny, because we noticed when filming is synonymous, and we thought, mal schauen obs anyone remembers, but that it so obviously is, well, then it was not as thought .
Now I see this more as synonymous camera and editing exercises as well as film. And for the future, I will then maybe get someone to write it and can no longer make themselves.




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