Frage von Max Sternenmeer:
Hello Forum,
I have a fairly short script written and would like to hear your opinion. Please do not take everything so seriously :-)!
https: / / share.acrocomcontent.com / adc / src / script + Wolfgang + V_2.pdf? nodeid = 92dd507f-663e-4f22-82dc-8eaddc1652d4 & key = EQTw3b1mTeacI2mtICoDNuAq3hOOhTDicYvdHiabWzBs2hvby7Ss% 2FHN9Pk% 2FYuq% 2BX5AciGC2sp82n% 0A8q2r6Ba3dw4jxe011g2fdEqczTAf5jsC7l2Ge81LyVM6qd2Gc8TO9rr1gHdUWaYqo1Jr0qmwPYKg% 0AvvH% 2BZZWFviuPhTO% 2BWZR0KasqD48ysaKSnUvS855ydalIwxYxqNaoqvlfjh54PA% 3D% 3D
Best Regards
Max
Antwort von PowerMac:
The link does not work. Only when it is copied manual. What is the URL tag?
Antwort von PowerMac:
Aggressive, adolescent, pain, dramaturgically bad, full of formal errors and a stupid topic. Very experienced and mature, you can not be. 18? 20?
Antwort von HolgerH_2:
I have a fairly short script written and would like to hear your opinion. Weia .... Hopefully it's not filmed.
Greeting
Holger
Antwort von Lutz Dieckmann:
Hi Max,
This Art Book is in West Hollywood every day in the dozen filmed. Your film can be so calm in this environment to play, there is nothing wrong. Just try a real story to tell. Try something abzuringen the topic, so there was not yet. Attempts phrases that can not be expected. Now it is transparent and has nothing exciting. But that is exactly the charm, the exciting stories of life to tell.
Do you like nothing bad criticism, learn from it. Write the Book at 20x and you'll see it's improving.
There are instructions about how s.Meer sand in the network.
Greeting
Lutz
Antwort von Bespi:
Aggressive, adolescent, pain, dramaturgically bad, full of formal errors and a stupid topic. Very experienced and mature, you can not be. 18? 20? powermac you were not invited yourself to describe. ;-)
Antwort von Hier Ist Jackie:
moritz hello,
I fands funny. just sometime it was too funny zb. s.der imagine where janet Biedermann the second time and crying all only bring claims. if you are out and again a funny position bringest is ok. but if you too much salt in the soup kippst, well, then yes you know what happens.
format is unfortunately not synonymous in your script.
using your humor can be seen already that you have a thriving creative and that is a sure sign of intelligence. This imaginative you must stop in a form so as to pack the dough into a form and then comes the cake arises that everyone wants to eat.
the warped kommentare loose you need to ignore it. konsturktives if there is nothing you can ignore the loose.
a tip (there is only in english):
http://www.amazon.de/Screenwriters-Bible-Complete-Writing-Formatting/dp/1879505843/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=books-intl-de&qid=1222244442&sr=8-1
where thou comest from?
tu dir das mal rein. is a script of mine. just as slanted as your document.
http://www.file-upload.net/download-1072044/Das-Fenster-zur-Freiheit.pdf.html
jackie. no, not onasis but the type of shining his old flat with an ax to make.
