Frage von partylogger:
Hi, from my Iceland-stays in 2008 and 2009, I have included miscellaneous footage and it is finally cut into a small documentation together. I would be interested in the opinions of "professionals". I do this just as a hobby, but still want to learn and know what is good and what is not as good and as I could have done differently.
The film takes about 60 minutes, so it is split into four parts with vimeo, so the HD quality (720p) can be reported not too large losses.
So enter either directly from vimeo.com, eg on the first part:
http://www.vimeo.com/11531452
or view all the parts on my page:
http://www.firsturl.de/vUO62ck
Would be glad if you take the time you could use too. I hope this is not wasted ;-)
Known weaknesses:
had - in some cases, unfortunately, not sufficient wind
- My voiceovers, ploppt sometimes, because I have ran again
Antwort von Manuell:
Hi,
I like very real. As you say already, unfortunately not quite as good O-Sound.
Which Camera do you have rotated?
Next time, maybe catch something valuable the original sound, the whole thing would certainly add value to something else. There are really very beautiful shots here, but have only watched the first part, look like the rest next.
Antwort von partylogger:
Hi,
I like very real. As you say already, unfortunately not quite as good O-Sound.
Which Camera do you have rotated?
Next time, maybe catch something valuable the original sound, the whole thing would certainly add value to something else. There are really very beautiful shots here, but have only watched the first part, look like the rest next. Thank you, the images were rotated with the following equipment:
Canon HV20
Panasonic GH1
Panasonic TM300
For better O-Sound have I really worried a Rode VideoMic with a Rode deadcat. This does not happen to me again.
Antwort von schlaflos011:
Hi,
there are really great shots. Do!
The Rode Part your next project will still make more professional.
Antwort von Axel:
First, a thick pros that the film will not be, as he is. Your attitude, the reason why you made the documentary coincides with the 1:1 style. Therefore, it is per se Schonmal interesting. Even your voice is good. You might just as the recording
to be
perfect really, but it sounds authentic, honest, genuine. I do not know what you eingesprochen the Articles, I find myself garage band good for it: you can see the film in a small window and podcast your own voice (Real Instrument, voice for radio /) check on prior to the Recording Headphones, it already try live a de-Popp filter and finely adjusted. In the recording itself, I would find the listening of your own voice but irritating.
The advantage of an amateur production (it's okay if I as an amateur this is the name?) Hold is not s.Format specifications need to. (There was an old Harald Schmidt Show a sketch on TV staff "today: The time devil", held at the Schmidt a black devil-hand puppet, with whom he talked. - Who are you? - I am the time the devil. - The devil time doing? What are you watching TV? - I steal the precious air time.) So you can wallow in your impressionistic images. The camera pans out of the car are very good for detecting the landscape. But they will in the long run a little tiring and should be more
action alternate with (people are under-represented - okay, is probably as in Iceland, home of that ash Monsters, which we present in May brought the nuclear winter, Jörg Z. It would be still too many people ).
Antwort von partylogger:
Hi,
there are really great shots. Do!
The Rode Part your next project will still make more professional. At least the sound will be better. Thanks ;-)
Antwort von partylogger:
First, a thick pros that the film will not be, as he is. Your attitude, the reason why you made the documentary coincides with the 1:1 style. Therefore, it is per se Schonmal interesting. Even your voice is good. You might just as the recording to be perfect really, but it sounds authentic, honest, genuine. I do not know what you eingesprochen the Articles, I find myself garage band good for it: you can see the film in a small window and podcast your own voice (Real Instrument, voice for radio /) check on prior to the Recording Headphones, it already try live a de-Popp filter and finely adjusted. In the recording itself, I would find the listening of your own voice but irritating.
The advantage of an amateur production (it's okay if I as an amateur this is the name?) Hold is not s.Format specifications need to. (There was an old Harald Schmidt Show a sketch on TV staff "today: The time devil", held at the Schmidt a black devil-hand puppet, with whom he talked. - Who are you? - I am the time the devil. - The devil time doing? What are you watching TV? - I steal the precious air time.) So you can wallow in your impressionistic images. The camera pans out of the car are very good for detecting the landscape. But they will in the long run a little tiring and should be more action alternate with. Thank you, that with GarageBand I have to try it. I have Soundtrack Pro and recorded with a Snowball my voice and then cut in Final Cut in the film. Previously, I had the voiceover function in Final Cut used, but as I listened to me always when I was sitting here in the bathroom.
Yes, s.der or there are lengths to notice. Overall, I wanted to cut a quiet film, always with the possibility to let the pictures on you. I could cut one or two sequences and still reinnehmen for a few other places with.
Yes and amateur to me is not an insult, for I am one. Do the s.der for fun thing, and have joy in me making things.
What has been missing for Action to you? What would you do differently s.der place?
Antwort von Blackeagle123:
Maybe there is even image archives, the images s.Deinem be interested?
Which Camera did you get filmed? really nice shots are grown!
Greetings!
Antwort von partylogger:
Maybe there is even image archives, the images s.Deinem be interested?
Which Camera did you get filmed? really nice shots are grown!
Greetings! Thank you, the images were rotated with the following equipment:
Canon HV20
Panasonic GH1
Panasonic TM300
Antwort von domain:
What has been missing for Action to you? What would you do differently s.der place? One anticipates that the film has liked to me synonymous, synonymous mainly because I did not know the western part of Iceland.
What can I do differently now with travel documentaries is that I always try more to bring people into the Picture and, secondly, that I Articles mainly just local talk or talk let that brings more action and has more authentic.
At universe documentaries to get up anyway never working with quite different means, much more synonymous Money and time.
Therefore I have decided next to a lot of territory to show what one sees in glossy documentaries just not always one's own experience including family, such as fish market, People, Shopping, cooking, eating, snoring, etc. and above all lots of O-Sound.
Antwort von partylogger:
What has been missing for Action to you? What would you do differently s.der place?
One anticipates that the film has liked to me synonymous, synonymous mainly because I did not know the western part of Iceland.
What can I do differently now with travel documentaries is that I always try more to bring people into the Picture and, secondly, that I Articles mainly just local talk or talk let that brings more action and has more authentic.
At universe documentaries to get up anyway never working with quite different means, much more synonymous Money and time.
Therefore I have decided next to a lot of territory to show what one sees in glossy documentaries just not always one's own experience including family, such as fish market, People, Shopping, cooking, eating, snoring, etc. and above all lots of O-Sound. Sounds good, I am again this year in Iceland and may try once synonymous.
Antwort von Blackeagle123:
But let the snoring away: D
Antwort von shipoffools:
Indeed, many fine recordings of the "dangle soul." : O)
I like it.
As a suggestion:
(I looked at so far, however, synonymous only the first part ...)
The trips in the car are good as a contrast to the otherwise acting almost like a slideshow of static images, but sometimes get too long synonymous. This brings me for the second point of criticism: Camera pans unfortunately completely missing. This is actually not a travel document.
You work a lot with black panels, which may indeed be a nice element of style, but often applied to the impression of a "Slideshow" stronger.
Some shots s.Anfang (around 3:00) are badly blurred, some very wrong (eg 13:30) underexposed, some (eg, 3:35 to 3:45).
When used of you in the mail geradegedrehten shots you did not fully gecroppt the edge (eg 12.20)
The strong wind in the recordings you can defuse with a high-pass filter, but it should not be removed completely, because of strong wind as O-Sound is m. E. after just a documentary about Iceland.
Recordings, in which something moves me somehow all jerky, but it can be synonymous s.Vimeo.
But otherwise really very nicely done, very well spoken synonymous.
PS: Kleiner content error: The (probably) the highest cliff in Europe is s.der coast of Madeira: Cabo Girão, about 580 m high, o)
Antwort von partylogger:
Indeed, many fine recordings of the "dangle soul." : O)
I like it.
As a suggestion:
(I looked at so far, however, synonymous only the first part ...)
The trips in the car are good as a contrast to the otherwise acting almost like a slideshow of static images, but sometimes get too long synonymous. This brings me for the second point of criticism: Camera pans unfortunately completely missing. This is actually not a travel document.
You work a lot with black panels, which may indeed be a nice element of style, but often applied to the impression of a "Slideshow" stronger.
Some shots s.Anfang (around 3:00) are badly blurred, some very wrong (eg 13:30) underexposed, some (eg, 3:35 to 3:45).
When used of you in the mail geradegedrehten shots you did not fully gecroppt the edge (eg 12.20)
The strong wind in the recordings you can defuse with a high-pass filter, but it should not be removed completely, because of strong wind as O-Sound is m. E. after just a documentary about Iceland.
Recordings, in which something moves me somehow all jerky, but it can be synonymous s.Vimeo.
But otherwise really very nicely done, very well spoken synonymous.
PS: Kleiner content error: The (probably) the highest cliff in Europe is s.der coast of Madeira: Cabo Girão, about 580 m high, o) Thanks for this detailed feedback. Yes, the recordings in Stykkisholmur wobble a little (very blurry, I would subjectively feel differently). Never go off without a tripod ;-)
I have drummed into a basic rule to get zooms and pans to give. I have done consistently (my previous tripod would have been inappropriate for synonymous).
But you have sharp eyes. The scaled too few scenes were struck me at all. That can change.
And since I am myself a set against Fehlinfo. That gives it even higher cliffs of Madeira, it has kept from me ;-)
Thank you, very useful feedback.
Antwort von markus2h:
Would be glad if you take the time you could use too. I hope this is not wasted ;-)
Although not 100 percent seen everything - but first a big compliment, very nice pictures are included. For sound you have to say anything more that you yourself noticed and noted several speakers already.
Allow myself a few comments about the pictures:
- I noticed in the consideration that you work with apparently different codecs (probably comes from the different cameras) - sometimes you lose very much by the high quality compression - a pity for it.
- Recording Some have really got it, than to be offered Footage
- I am no friend of "Onboard" - recordings from moving car - for my taste there are too many
- may have some pictures to me a bit too static - you had to s.and (even in buildings or on the ship wrecks) maybe a little swing (slow, soft) - are used sparingly synonymous pans justified
- And now a big praise - you have a very good eye and a flair for load images - all in all, I pull my hat next - so!
LG, Markus
Antwort von shipoffools:
... Yes, the recordings in Stykkisholmur wobble a little (very blurry, I would subjectively feel differently). Never go off without a tripod ;-)
... The audience can not mean that you had when no tripod here ... ;-)
I have drummed into a basic rule to get zooms and pans to give. I have done consistently (my previous tripod would have been inappropriate for synonymous).
... Did you this basic rule a photographer "drummed into"?
Film / Video is not a photograph.
It must not in any "picture" to make a difference, but basically
one expects that in the video does something ", ie moving. And if this action was not by people, cars or anything else happens, you should just (in the correct dimensions) Picture the move itself, such as camera movements, zooms or pans. Zoom should be used sparingly and truly (as any camera movement) to be motivated. The camera is moving as it were, the salt in the soup of the film, when in the attitude and nothing else does. Otherwise you could really just take pictures "only" and present a slideshow with music and suggestions backed.
Edit: It also provides, for example, a pivot for nature shots a better overview, a general impression of the scene.
Antwort von domain:
If one compares Amateurfime with professional films and analyzed, it is in any case before me that amateur films in the documentary sector are often quite musiklastig. There are often many different pieces to use and will also be leveled, they are often too strong, often until midnight DB mE up which they too dominant.
Furthermore, I notice a lot of synonymous to quick level changes, such as when a spoken text, the music quite rapidly moved back up to full volume.
However, I am not sure if this was not just my tastes.
For professional shoot me the music is often not at all, although it is present. It is apparently only for subliminal reinforcement of a desired mood. I personally consider to be essential.
Antwort von B.DeKid:
I have drummed into a basic rule to get zooms and pans to give. I have done consistently (my previous tripod would have been inappropriate for synonymous).
...
Did you this basic rule a photographer "drummed into"?
Film / Video is not a photograph.
..... What do you mean because ;-)
Sun will never spells of photographers!
I am appreciative of the more likely he has heard so NEM news cameraman EB,-P Tues always conditioned only stand around and hold on on it mostly just meaningless political protagonists Um LOl
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Ne So the basic rule is nonsense! That you will never have so declared any one of these two Zumpften. And then forget the same again.
There are from time to time situations where you should rotate, and zoom ok Wöhrder current recording film is already quite advanced and should be used only as a truly unique scenic resources but none of it gladly, if such leave is made amateur filmmakers.
A zoom is good for one does not change the distance to the object must (Film / Stillimage) and you have to halt the pivoting synonymous use in some cases even go with the "" is for example in sports photography, such a case.
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I found the pictures that I looked quite good.
Sound and speaker is again something else but that I did not put so now value.
MfG
B. DeKid
