Frage von jodelwirt.de:
Hi Friends,
WIRT the Jodel was once again busy!
http://de.youtube.com/watch?v=zvGLQo8Eiaw
Here you see an image spot for the company Lübbe ring, each quarter will see a new spot ...
Please watch in HD, I do not know why the quality is so bad, if it is in normal quality watch!?
I would be back on your criticism happy!
Greeting
The Jodel WIRT
Antwort von tatita:
Not bad, I like it in any case!
Lg
Antwort von ksr:
Nice idea, nice pictures, nice mood!
(HD and then on to old, crazy world;)
But Text and Picture correspond in my opinion not always so accurate ...
"Idea": Maybe the boy had the sled only need to tinker
"Together with the customer": He is running solely on the hallway next ... okay, with the sled, all depends on how man's understanding ...
The "parable" is unfortunately not quite as daft as it suggests is optical, I'd say ...
Ne font bigger track, if the spot is not just for movies is ...
Antwort von Axel:
The sequence with the sledge, the prospects for the Camera, the directions of movement, sometimes dynamic, sometimes static image composition, which of course fitted together, the dynamics even more increased (excitement, anticipation, perforce Patient Weiterstapfen) is wonderful. With the recent adjustment, the downward rodelnden happy boy who will, however, this possibility of identification ends. Previously you had proved that film language with a "More" s.Bedeutung recruits. That is what you so, otherwise you would have the scene is not "poetic" with confidence and motivation of a company compared. Now you have to say that just this last picture from a
"hey, I can see the simple things right and so undisguised as a child" on
"Ah, children. So easy to make happy" is.
The faded "technique thrilled" confuses one hand, and the whole comparison is suddenly dragged herbei s.den hair. By - Fump! -
Lübbe ring breaks not only the beautiful Music unpleasant, but the viewer synonymous benevolence, the daring Comparison to follow. Although I
understand what
should be, I am stupid and wonder: Lübbe ring? Have built around the
sled? Two criticisms:
1. A subjective attitude (POV or prosecution) for the sled downhill, perhaps supported with a cheer, as the last picture would be a better clip (although the arc of enthusiasm between the luge and the use of any tool is still tense arg) on the
technology enthusiastically. 2. The nature and manner in which the music stops, it would only be acceptable for a comparison: childlike innocence, strum strum, BUMM! Evil black Lübbe grave stone ring, evil, evil ...
Antwort von jodelwirt.de:
Thank you for the first reactions!
This "FUMP" s.Ende is with us a fixed sound, when each video is again ... That's why I left him unchanged, but the idea of him "soft" to make, I will try!
We are in this clip exactly to what you kritisierst! It is a simple technique (as here, the sleds) delight. If small children are looking over the sledding will be some customer synonymous with safety of our products are happy! :-)
It is, of course, suddenly s.den-fetched, but "technique thrilled" is also synonymous to the company slogan or any of the statements have the ring Lübbe mind!
Would just like of you yet know whether the technique of the well and the rotation has been implemented! Finally, I really am a total amateur ... I have not learned the material, everything from learning by doing!
Greeting
The Jodel WIRT
Antwort von Axel:
Would just like of you yet know whether the technique of the well and the rotation has been implemented! Finally, I really am a total amateur ... I have not learned the material, everything from learning by doing! This is called
fishing for compliments. But you want to hear it anyway.
As in your other film, the camera work falling into the eye the best. Criticism in this vein, I would not take a tragedy. Whether a person is of a picture can make you see at first glance. Is this you?
Okay, you're self-taught. The defense of mistake in your movie, I feel as lame. I think you should learn your own approach to criticism, then the finished film. This is mostly a question of an entirely different sense, the conversion at a minimal effect of cutting, but perhaps the concept is synonymous with complicated or already contains a mistake.
Please do not critique it as arrogant to Take Down. We are interested in film as a form of expression, because there is no ambiguity any more, because the recording of the images have all the ideas from the script have been cut and so the only one tightening, cutting a path is?
Who makes good pictures, you must in the myriad possibilities, a recording to "frame", to coagulate Picture to let the emotional and / or intellectually stimulating,
one can find
a good one.
When cut, it is difficult for those later, the importance of this recording of the sequence and hence the importance of the sequence for the film, whose set design, to assess. A cutter tends to be in itself a strong rauszuschneiden images because they often distort the sense of sequence, much to the resentment of the cameraman, who sees his performance ignored. Most camera men are stubborn and do not come with criticism well clear.
If you make pictures, conceivable only insofar s.den cut synonymous times a few other perspectives to take. Stay as you own cameraman
If you cut, you enter a different name, because you have to work the camera mercilessly criticize Jodel landlord. A good cutter will then cut his own versions of more radical criticism. Most editors tolerate criticism very well and invite you to share, however, synonymous good. Most editors are incapable of making good pictures.
