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Moroi - Trailer (my first short film) feedback?



Frage von Walt:
Januar 2009

My first short film "Moroi" was established in March 2008 s.fünf filming days with a great crew and a non-straight little effort. The film editing is now finished and the Sound Editor in the last trains. Then it's still s.die transitions and s.die Farkorrektur - in January he will be completely ready.

The first trailer is now synonymous finished: http://de.youtube.com/watch?v=ebVzxSK3Qls

The trailer shows scenes from the yet unprocessed raw materials.

Short Story: A man once said to a child over it. However, this child is of far and wide to see nothing. Did he just imaginary? When he wants to continue, strike his car ... he does is walk on the way forward ...

Overall, the film lasts 11 minutes.



Antwort von davidsch:

'm by no expert, but am absolutely fascinated of the things here amateure (?) (hopefully it was not an insult) to make the legs! hut ab



Antwort von Debonnaire:

It looks ever promising! Bin gespannt, then time a final version to see if everything is correct and aufgepeppt! Holding us up to date!





Antwort von Walt:

Amateur match already ;-) Have never previously produced or what led Directing - is my first work:)

Stefan



Antwort von hannibalekta:

Hi, looks really good. I must say, however, now that the trailer is not particularly catchy.
Moreover, I do not have the impression that the boy is approached ... that occurred in the cut somehow not out. I'm still very curious. What budget did you? What do you have so rotated? How many people were there?

Hannes



Antwort von AmateurProfi:

looks good I think. Good synonymous of the comment below the video ... synonymous, I had to immediately s.Lynchs / Twin Peaks think:-D

"hannibalekta" wrote:
What budget did you? What do you have so rotated? How many people were there?

Hannes


that would interest me synonymous.



Antwort von Walt:

Was shot with an XL2 with P + S adapter MINI35, dolly, crane, lots of light, etc. Crew was about 20 people. The budget was approximately 15,000 euros from my own pocket

Best regards,

Stefan



Antwort von Axel:

"Walt" wrote:
The budget was approximately 15,000 euros from my own pocket ...


Swallowing. That is devotion. The gods must be delighted. Honestly, I wish to move your movie success.



Antwort von hsp:

looks really good now everyone is curious how the film then looks s.ende :-)

well done, the child is with the synonymous struck me but the audience is so synonymous bissel think :-)

15000th - respekt :-)

much success with the film, I wish you



Antwort von PowerMac:

The trailer is far too lahmarschig cut. The following film has a similar content and shows how to use an exciting trailer produced:




Antwort von Walt:

Is still synonymous together the first ever customized trailer from the pure raw materials. Since there are no effects in it, no color correction, etc. ..

Furthermore, it is not a slasher Moroi or proper horror film. The entire film is told very slow, slow shots, etc.

Since then say "This one is too lahmarschig cut, look at the times," is too simple. Neither speed, nor Machart film Thematically the film is comparable with Moroi. "And a similar content", he has not synonymous - nor add that Cold Prey II synonymous not a small production.

'm Open to any criticism. But to compare apples with pears is synonymous not make sense ...



Antwort von Chezus:

that was synonymous to constructively meant.
The trailer makes stop rather feel as if they were the first few minutes of the film, which will then cease.

A trailer must basically be quickly cut and many facets of the actual movie and include the audience excited.

The style is good, the trailer would only just be shorter, with more cuts.

That no image editing was used, I buy from you now;)

I like the title s.Ende not. I do not know what programs you have, but I would maybe even a few minutes of work purely stuck.
Possibly. a little smoke in the background, a few reflections on the titles, change the width and slower scale. Take s.Besten any standard font and provide them with textures (as an alpha mask).

If yes to the movie fit.
Otherwise, nice work and nice pictures!



Antwort von PowerMac:

Then inside the trailer, with which you're happy! I think the trailer "lahmarschig" what are you doing? Your justifies you, declares brings excuses from the raw materials, of any securities. That nobody wants to hear. Nobody wants to see unfinished trailer, also the maker of the publication of apology with excuses. Man released when finished and is at his work. But you're still beginners, so you will be forgiven. Ah yes, the trailer is synonymous s.sich slow and could be more dramatic cut in the handle. At the least effect on me so.



Antwort von Walt:

As I said, I'm very open to criticism. And I do not intend to go after "excuses", but only give the current status of the trailer again.

May well be the Powermac is an absolute professional (I am not) and already tens of hundred contributions, or one thousand has written, his sound is compared to a newcomer but not exactly friendly, at least when I come across so, sorry. For me wikt just too much "of top-down" ...

And there was no image postprocessing. For example, the blackout scene was rotated (complete night filming, then light runtergedreht).



Antwort von domain:

Oh that's just so over, is never bad intentioned but informative.
Elsewhere, I have even synonymous ever written, never half-owned sites hearty but only the things of which you yourself are convinced of and which we know that they are appropriate under the circumstances no longer improve.
The weak are the things that people pretty much synonymous in memory and the professionals can not afford.
I find your product from the intermediate visual are very good, but it is true, it might be more like flash highlights included so curious to make.



Antwort von DWUA:

All good trailers are dynamic, impressive, short;
in Picture & Sound.
Even for the (Yawn)-boring films.
Is pure advertising strategy.
(AIDA).
PM is right!



Antwort von Moritzk:

So I am anxious to see the finished film ... but let's face it, how comes a Filmneueinsteiger on a budget of 15000 ¬?
And how can a novice then 20 professional staff to instruct?

When will there be to watch the final product?



Antwort von PowerMac:

For a talented producer with no trouble at all. 15,000 euros, almost nothing. Just try to obtain ten-fold. Employees? Get loose.



Antwort von Moritzk:

"PowerMac" wrote:
For a talented producer with no trouble at all. 15,000 euros, almost nothing. Just try to obtain ten-fold. Employees? Get loose.


Well certainly plays a role synonymous old, so I'm beginning of the 20th .. and have now synonymous my first short film finished, with a budget of 0 ¬ :-)
Nevertheless, the film is not bad, well is just the first ^ ^ Is it safe to watch synonymous soon.
But 15000 ¬, not bad.



Antwort von Commanderjanke:

"PowerMac" wrote:
For a talented producer with no trouble at all. 15,000 euros, almost nothing. Just try to obtain ten-fold. Employees? Get loose.


Boah in such statements, I could co ...!
Without something to have produced, with a production which does not claim or the prospect has to refinance are already respectable 15000 ¬!

You produce the next BATMAN ... certainly!



Antwort von PowerMac:

"Commanderjanke" wrote:
"PowerMac" wrote:
For a talented producer with no trouble at all. 15,000 euros, almost nothing. Just try to obtain ten-fold. Employees? Get loose.


Boah in such statements, I could co ...!
Without something to have produced, with a production which does not claim or the prospect has to refinance are already respectable 15000 ¬!

You produce the next BATMAN ... certainly!


respectable, but nothing special. 150,000 would be super.



Antwort von Walt:

As I said, all I have completely self-financed with the crew and I just had luck, because they really done a super job have.

Color correction and soundtrack has finally been completed and the film was already synonymous with some festivals and competitions up - let's see if he is adopted by some (although he still further declared).

Soon synonymous, there is a real trailer out of the final material. Lasts but a little.




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