Frage von Don_Koljone_Entertainment:
My new music video
- Gerrit feat. Choclate - Free like an eagle -
Online:
Would welcome criticism and comments.
Thank you
Kolya
Antwort von mann:
OK I have just enough time and mercy on me wants to leave a short comment, ¬ 5 fee, payment by paypal possible!
It must first be: not at all my Mucke, and I think BMW synonymous shit. But video you can look at themselves. A couple of times to me are the heads of the characters too much in the middle, and it ziemich much space. Even the guy in front of the palm (3 times) is exactly in the center front, where one could file s.der composition yet.
Even the background in some settings, I find stale: for example, football field / lawn (synonymous here the guy back in the mid undynamic). So since I could not think of a better background, perhaps synonymous not only half or long shot, but close, perhaps synonymous times blurred. Oh yes and the whole thing rather early in the morning filmed, because of the colors!
Antwort von thsbln:
oh dear ...
Antwort von mekong:
One can not look at everything synonymous purely technical / craft. Maybe include Droege backgrounds and the colors washed out so the concept. If a kind of rap rebellion against the dull and without prospects environment? But OK, I know with the snag not really. Is not my thing.
Antwort von mann:
Yes, in principle ... but this rap BMW guys want so abgefahr'n relatively cool + be, right? So That kind of faded turf football or 'nen field in the background .... You think this fits?
Even if it was rotated in the country and not just horny background there, well maybe ne Blonde loose in the stable or something.
