Hello! My first short film is now finished and as far as here so many professionals rumtummeln I wanted to hear a bit of criticism and opinion:)
Antwort von JMS Productions:
So first congratulations on your first short film! What struck me during the seeing, is that the sound is often quite suddenly stops / chopped off or there is sudden volume differences. Especially if you've made an incision. Have you made any Atmoaufnahmen, drunterlegen would have you do? Because you can cut through something like concealing change ...
Antwort von Axel:
For a promising debut. If you are here Schonmal is reading, you know that the criticism is particularly merciless, as this is the only one that a further forward.
- Not entirely successful recordings, technically. We see how it is meant aesthetic-dramatic, but above all belichtungstechnisch / metered lighting values poorly.
- Rauschiger, reverberant, unattractive sound that sounds like a picture change across almost like a Super-8 splice on the magnetic layer. At least one Soundüberblendung, better yet, an external directional microphone and a sound mix of s.allerbesten O-Sound and effects. The disembodied voice from the beyond, of course, must be included in the fully anechoic chamber, not in the "room" (and they should not synonymous "recited" sound, but that belongs to the next point).
- Moderate performers. Well, you will say, there are lay people. Moderate excuse because other film makers, professionals, of course, already synonymous with lay people worked and achieved good results. The granddaddy of dramatic leadership, Stanislavsky, say there are no bad actors, only bad directors. You can read about what he and others recommend.
- Unclear point. She is dying, because her drunken friend the car wraps around the tree, and their trivial life passes by s.ihr. Well then, bye! So it must be because it could be of interest as one, or is the current student generation as nihilistic?
Antwort von Ringkeeper:
First of all thanks for the criticism (even these 'relentless' of this I find very good because you can pull out a lot.)! As far as technique and sound, I must agree with you completely. We had stupidly only the camera and no lights, so the lighting is rather along the lines of "We take what's there." The night scenes are reworked by the way during the day and then rotated.
The sound is crap annoys me synonymous animal. Problem was there among other things, which we recorded extremely quiet and I had to reinforce all pretty strong. I sit down and try again but turn a little with reinzubringen homogeneity.
Actors were in fact all the simple times amateurish alliance. The friend I play itself - but only because the real actor is down and we had to make the camera again. Merkt synonymous one, I can not act completely and wills really at all synonymous.
The round is my first work, was simply synonymous for me to make very strong in the foreground, how are movies really. Even as I organized the people that equipment etc. We see so synonymous that I have done quite a lot alone, which was not so ideal, you can not stop everything at the same time concentrating.
The next project, however, is already being planned. I'd like to put more emphasis on the particular technology (keyword highlighting) and run through some far-sighted planning in general. This time it synonymous with sophisticated script.
The script of this film was more a night and fog action;)
