Hey folks, you look at the movie times when you want to help me and gently as eucht all like it. It is not yet the finished version. I still cut grad dran Rummer and voice recordings will be re-recorded again synonymous. For the first impression, it is but first ...
Mir, it is important whether you: 1. The first film ever sees, so it would be cool if their story with your words again wiedergebt;) and interpretation are very important to me!
2. Simple things you mention, perhaps even more disturbing and could be improved or matters which it will hold good
Soo here is the movie, enjoy:
Antwort von Axel:
1. The first film ever sees, so it would be cool if their story with your words again wiedergebt;) and interpretation are very important to me!
An overwrought, introverted type ponders in his apartment in a) a horror trip, b) a genuine schizophrenia it appears to him or c) the disoriented mind the previous owner / tenant who has apparently hanged / hanged was. Finally, he takes an overdose of pills, Koniec. The "spirit" is perhaps his alter ego / a projection (in the psychotic sense).
2. Simple things you mention, perhaps even more disturbing and could be improved
- The voice tiefergepitchte ghost is not scary. An alienation as such should not be detectable, and the deep voice has nothing to do with that one shudders. - No smoking in the first setting of the hanged, is too much Kintopp.
I like very much s.diesem film. The brain looks as though it umgestülpt, Class. The cast is good. Photography, Effects and approach in the music are good. Less applied in thick soundtrack, I would change.
Antwort von mr.easyest:
I believe that in the film to a person goes to an overdose of drugs or strong psychoactive drug and it takes every time a so-called horror trip gets. This horror trip, the person each time a monster / ghost. Thus the person extreme anxiety. Finally, recognize the person that it was itself in the mirror has seen. Is that so, or I in the final scene which hineininterpretiert wrong?
I like the film very well. Light, image structure and drama are great. The Voice of the imaginary person, so the mind, is very amateurish, because they are not on the face of this spirit and in general do not fit really is professional.
PS If the NEN anti-drug film, or something like that be so?
Antwort von FritzK:
Hi, You have certainly a lot of work, idea, script, find collaborators, Directing, etc. had. The film is not easy to understand. My question: For whom did you get the film made and where should it be shown?
I think: MACH GO FILMS! Greeting FritzK
Antwort von Mister Mastermind:
my 2 cents:
I think the story badly. while certainly not bad, but it speaks to me, absolutely not. with the substance of the story already is good, the problem with the hallucinations and alter ego is good.
the implementation of the recordings I find to be 90% very well, like. the vote, as has been said, to set up and do not fit with the images you see.
s.schnitt I would not change synonymous, like synonymous. I've struggled after that, we as viewers will somehow left alone, I did not know what the whole should synonymous constant repetition of this phrase is not good. but I find the pictures and the sections fairly well, so like the exterior. naja ich synonymous already beginning to repeat s.mich ^ ^
looks pretty after application for any film academies in, correct?
Antwort von wadik:
hi you would be interested of me where you have the sounds? they themselves have done? if so with what?
Antwort von DWUA:
As so often, the guy is the best thing. Since you have more trouble than preparing a coherent storyboards.
Repetition is not always annoying. But permanent (brain)-Kernspintomographien especially. Affect Duration unimaginative.
Why do you have the beautiful "subscribed" HANDS so fast truncated? You have no chance to admire them!
So, focus on rhythm Acht! And: REPRESENTATIONS "formulating"! !
The DSDS would be of much meaner, but you are for us in the "Recall";))