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Respiratory robbery - The Short Film for in-between



Frage von hieronvision:
Februar 2008

http://de.youtube.com/watch?v=HwD3yHV1dzk

The film is only 2 minutes - just enough to get at each setting long enough to make a head, as it turns s.besten. Dynamic, rapidly and in no case boring - it looks s.and you tell me what about this! Thank you!



Antwort von Chrissigorn:

camera work: pretty good!
Staging: good (location would perhaps be better / some settings you have in this kind have often seen -> Slowmotioneinsatz, jumping over hedges (unnecessarily, since the escape could injure or lose advantage by giving back on its feet need))
Dynamics: very good (good cuts, a pleasant sight bill)
Music: passend
Effects: Fair (very good in their presentation)
Cast: the "evil" perhaps a little carelessly zuuuuu / slow / "Neo-term"

Overall: well done. Which Camera?



Antwort von jansi:

Overall good.
But:
Inappropriate that the "evil" red shoes or socks helps.
Music I find synonymous not quite as suitable, perhaps, it is simply synonymous with quiet.
camera work really well, change of perspective, but somewhat confusing.
Story: gabs one?





Antwort von tobesdop:

Camera and editing were very good!

The grading, the look of the actor (costume as "appearance" that mimic agreed, but the evil I was and somewhat gaunt flappsig) and the Effects (shots), I found not so great. Sounds quite good, the music reminded me s.mein first mobile :-)



Antwort von PowerMac:

Quite ok for a Directingübung. camera work is sometimes even standing. Cutting mediocre. Colors are bad, not particularly performers. But as a whole in order to get an exercise. For the staging of Action-Shooting requires such experience. So much better than any series since RTL is not synonymous ...



Antwort von Flati:

The "evil" is too sweet! Why has he not been shot at 33 seconds as both simultaneously on the picture to be seen?
Still very nice view. The red socks but do not go.



Antwort von AndyZZ:

I think for someone who is afraid to be shot, he runs a bit too cozy. That's more jogging than panic-stricken flight.



Antwort von Andreas_Kiel:

Yes, the run is not fast enough ;-) he also throws before his leap to the case (seen of him) in an angle of almost 45 ° to the left and straight hechtet ... the trunk is located directly in front of him. Otherwise, I noticed nothing, except the red socks. Perhaps this should be an allegory yes ;-)
BG, Andreas



Antwort von tobesdop:

@ powermac
nice ...



Antwort von tobesdop:

S.alle Hello!

Thank you only one time for your very friendly and substantive critiques!

Chrissigorn: The Camera is the Canon MVX-3i. A Einchipper the top, unfortunately bissl magentastichig -> Color Correction. What settings my test, you would have already seen more often? Sure, nothing new is really off, but exactly what you seem to be copied?

Jansi: Yes, absolutely right, the red shoes :-) That really bothers everyone .... boots would have been better because ... a detail that we had not taken into account. Sloppiness ... The music I have for the first time with MIDI composing himself. Not to hear, but at least right dritt free. Confusing change of perspective? Do you axis jumps? Where exactly?

The fact that the fleeing quickly running somehow comes across not so. In reality, the deal with a corner of the foot even verknackst ... Okay, müssmer it even more sure that perhaps the race more close-ups of his face shows initiated. Have quite.

Andreas_Kiel: The case ... yes. Location is already technically correct, the suitcase was left next bissl. Is simply rotated bad, it's missing a setting, as it is after the jump for Cases hindreht.



Antwort von tobesdop:

With "already seen" the settings I said jumping over the hedge and the subsequent unwinding.

Sure, this serves the Dynamics and it does not look bad, but logically is quite even and not (always wonder why in the Hollywood productions made). After all, there is increased risk of injury for the fugitives - and that would be his certain death.
Also, he loses this time and advantage.

So well made and implemented, but basically daft; P



Antwort von Bernd E.:

"Anonymous" wrote:
... well made and implemented, but basically daft ...

Therefore, in order to be on TV quality! ;-)

Gruß Bernd E.



Antwort von Axel:

Too complacent geschnitten. The Music s.die show a drawing of the lottery numbers think. Similarly, rapidly, like the whole thing is exciting. Red shoes? What her all respects.



Antwort von gasti:

It is OK, but unfortunately not breathtaking.
Something to clichéd ...

Why is it that assassin in the film never meet, or at least next shoot? Are all around such a bad protectors?
The annoying me sometimes.



Antwort von Chrissigorn:

... I think it will be every second movie after two minutes on end ...



Antwort von korl:

some very cool camera!
and the location I was actually very funny!
of fleeing was relatively cool but the bad guy ... not only the red shoes, the car was synonymous inappropriate! but otherwise the correct gesichtsausdruck!
the music was mediocre but the shot sounds rather bad, I found!
because you can find better!

also should look for the better, even after an effect on the whole be sent! (color, contrast, diffuse light or similar)



Antwort von targi:

what will we say short?
gruß cj



Antwort von chrissigorn:

Killer with red socks are the worst shooters;)




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