Frage von hieronvision:
Hello s.alle video enthusiasts!
I recently did a short film as a fun promotion for a college rotated. Would be glad if you give me well-meant advice you could give!
http://www.myvideo.de/watch/1425551
Thank you!
Antwort von Pianist:
Since I'm going to be no well-advice, because I quite like the thing. You have the resources with your very well implemented, we must not turn herumkritisieren. An evil axis jump is inside, where once the woman left and then immediately goes to the right, but otherwise you have made this very appealing!
Matthias
Antwort von JMitch:
Hi
What kind of camera did you not use?
Guest
Antwort von Axel:
I agree with Matthias. A few minor details only, please do not annoy:
1. Last criterion on the board early when I could not be read soon, until the second round.
2. On entering the library is sudden color temperature - will not change plans? It bothers me a bit.
3. Wind noise at the question of the teachers, gift.
Many would be happy such a tightly-designed, beautifully recorded and quick-cut film to bring. Congratulations.
Antwort von hieronvision:
Hello!
thank you for your good reviewers. Yes, the axle jump, it says in front of the grand staircase? Since I had the setting already reflect this, since the connection to the previous picture would not fit ... Hab thought it is not so, but since I've fooled me :-) I am pleased that in the movies (until now) no gross errors were discovered.
@ Guest: I shoot with a Canon MVX3i. Very farbgesättigt, good contrast, rel. great lens, so good depth blur possible (manual focus ring). Otherwise I find they are not recommended, it is complicated to use and the color tends to magenta stitch. Internal sound disappointing.
Antwort von PowerMac:
You have talent. Funny, nice idea. The technique could obviously be better. But this is true almost always.
Antwort von DWUA:
@ Hieronvision
The above comments, we would like to assist as follows:
Finally, a contribution outside of the otherwise popular Dungeons --
without weapons, wounds, disturbed souls ...!
Finally a
good game with the sun and its light!
Really "heart-warming"!
Since you have your tricks properly unpacked.
It is noticeable that the "depth blur" - the property
Camera playful fun you have prepared.
General:
You know so determined, so that something that inflationary used
more harm than good.
Such stylistic devices are too precious to lavish to deal with it.
You have shown how it can go.
Therefore, this contribution as a very positive synonymous valuable in training!
Thank you
DWUA
Antwort von r.p. television:
Can me the praise of my prescribing connect.
Small criticism:
A little too often emphasized effekt sharpness relocations, Geschwindigkeitsspünge and unnecessary shots.
It acts as if it was sometimes more important to you, your ability to prove the story to tell.
But perhaps this should indeed be synonymous.
But, really super-artisan certainly taking into account the equipment. Vorallem of flight through the portholes, I can just lop.
Antwort von KidKiller Prod:
Gefällt synonymous me really well =). Especially the camera work is well done. As for me personally even more interested:
The (fast) camera pans backing you with a subtly Wooosh sound. Are these self-generated? If so what? Or where else do you get this from?
Malte
Antwort von hieronvision:
Hello s.alle industrious critics!
I am very pleased with your reviewers, and the improvement proposals are factually, friendly and competent manner, super forum members here :-)
@ Rp television:
yes, you might be right that, for example, dramaturgically created this whole movie Effekterei is not suitable. But we had the fear that the story - because they are entertaining, but not high-quality content - not enough viewers to stay tuned to move, so we have to effective production criteria. That there is too much, I find an interesting position, which I would not have expected ... Thanks for the hint!
@ KidKiller:
The Woosh sounds (the really hot?) Are self-generated (like all other sounds in video). That is the burning flame of a deodorant bottle with nem Doppler effect and still echo bissl it. This can make many different sounds, synonymous door random noises before the bang, time-lapse elements, passing s.Hindernissen etc. ..
Antwort von Pianist:
The Woosh sounds (the really hot?) Are self-generated (like all other sounds in video). That is the burning flame of a deodorant bottle with nem Doppler effect and still echo bissl it. This can make many different sounds, synonymous door random noises before the bang, time-lapse elements, passing s.Hindernissen etc. .. Booyah! Finally someone who does not ask where you can download what may, but the simple hergeht and even what looks, absorbs and processes. So it must be!
Matthias
