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Schüler-Kurzfilm-Kritik: Aufhör'n wenn's am Schönsten ist

Student's Short Film Critique: Aufhör'n if it s.Schönsten



Frage von 02VideoFaBI:
Juli 2009

The title says yes almost everything I wanted you to our Short Film "Aufhör'n if it's s.Schönsten" draw attention to. We have him last year as the first joint film rotated (; all working for the film about 3 / 4 year). "We" are students of the 11th and 12 Class s.Schickhardt Gymnasium Herrenberg (;) in the Film AG. Criticism, opinions, suggestions and co. welcome!

Trailer: http://www.vimeo.com/5326026
Film: http://www.vimeo.com/5379091
Homepage: www.filmag.jimdo.com

ps.: That (the evening shots; Party) have become far too dark (; especially the later) I already know xD. Unfortunately, our lighting is not operated as required and we have without additional light rotated ...

The film is at (, cc) Creative Commons 3.0 BY-NC-ND U.S. licensed can be downloaded so happy and disseminated?

I look forward to your comments!
mfg, Fabian



Antwort von Moritzk:

"02VideoFaBI" wrote:
The title says yes almost everything I wanted you to our Short Film "Aufhör'n if it's s.Schönsten" draw attention to. We have him last year rotated (; all working for the film about 3 / 4 year). "We" are students of the 11th and 12 Class s.Schickhardt Gymnasium Herrenberg (;) in the Film AG. Criticism, opinions, suggestions and co. welcome!

Trailer: http://www.vimeo.com/5326026
Film: http://www.vimeo.com/5379091
Homepage: www.filmag.jimdo.com

ps.: That (the evening shots; Party) have become far too dark (; especially the later) I already know xD. Unfortunately, our lighting is not operated as required and we have without additional light rotated ...

I look forward to your comments!
mfg, Fabian


Hy Fabian

'm thrilled so far of the first section I've seen of your film. Unfortunately, I have looked at everything yet, because I put myself straight back into shooting. I'll watch tonight but repays the remaining film.
What I liked so far, are the varied perspectives and the teacher who has geschauspielert so good :-) although some scenes might be a little shorter, but that is interpretation.

What did you do it now your movie?

Regards



Antwort von 02VideoFaBI:

We want to see if we can not send the film in some competitions. If anyone knows a few competitions, just let me know here!

Danke schon mal for the nice feedback. That everything is perfect, I did not expect at our first film project synonymous ...


Gruß, Fabian





Antwort von Videofactory:

Hello,
So I have now looked at me schonmal the first seven minutes and think it's pretty good.

When I read student project, I got an immediate reminder s.einen Short film about someone who needed a hammer (; used to be 6 months or so here in the forum and horrible).

The outdoor scenes, although with the dark but still ok, what I've noticed much more unpleasant, is the sound.

In the scene where the boy goes out of the class, I understood only half.

Next time, make sure that you use an external microphone!

Get the movie weiterkucken in any case.

Gruß, Alex.



Antwort von 02VideoFaBI:

Hi, we have already utilizing (an external microphone, Rode Video Mic). However, we had no one who felt responsible for the sound, so I still synonymous addition Camera muste control the sound ... Will we in future pay more attention on it and looking for those responsible for their own!
Or stop the recording studio for dubbing ...



Antwort von Videofactory:

Have just seen on your homepage that its indeed a VideoMic had.

So I personally think it would be too costly indeed, the entire nachzusynchronisieren just because ne holds Tonangel None.

So I do that usually happens if I do not think I do not ask who would want to do it, but go to someone who just nix (; or does not do anything important) and to tell the that the it work .

Then you have erklähren which still short as you can, but so far it always went.


However, often synonymous'm lucky enough to make a photos and the others are very proud, if she insists ner with meaningful activity can be seen.



Antwort von 02VideoFaBI:

"Video Factory" wrote:
Have just seen on your homepage that its indeed a VideoMic had.

So I personally think it would be too costly indeed, the entire nachzusynchronisieren just because ne holds Tonangel None.

So I do that usually happens if I do not think I do not ask who would want to do it, but go to someone who just nix (; or does not do anything important) and to tell the that the it work .

Then you have erklähren which still short as you can, but so far it always went.


However, often synonymous'm lucky enough to make a photos and the others are very proud, if she insists ner with meaningful activity can be seen.

So we have made it synonymous ... Has not worked well so super



Antwort von actaion:

frankly, the story does not convince me.
It is not clear what to say to one of the film. The story does not really goes into depth, and shows the problems to little. Why does the main character remains in the entscheideneden scenes with the Nazis, and not with his friends and come along to the girl, remains unclear.

The individual scenes are sometimes worked quite well. Even the dialogues. Then you realize you did it made you think, and given you difficulty.
Technically is largely quite passable. make as synonymous the running scenes are well done (; why it was not possible, at least for a little light at the later party scenes that make sense to me, however, a not?)
But it lacks s.einer good overall story. As I said, the individual scenes are so good, abe is missing the big idea behind it. imho ye have probably done too early s.The details. You would have to work longer s.der basic idea, and you ask what we want to tell Eigntlich interesting?



Antwort von B.DeKid:

Krass - something different, sach as I do so nen effect that I will be able synonymous.

http://www.vimeo.com/2686761 ;-)


.................................................. .........

Sorry but I must say it was ok. Had expected worse.

Clearly there is still missing nen bissel was and yes, the scenes are still nen bissel too dark, but I was able to find one kucken.

Is make better than the silent films on Super 8 that we have rotated in the film ;-) Since AG had to be a clown so that the viewer through the overstatement of the joke knew ;-)

Power, so next time boys and girls ... Praise s.alle have involved, your class made. Can only get better.

MfG
B. DeKid


PS:
Worried, you get to the AG views Gabriele L. Rico Guaranteed develop writing - Linguistic creativity methodically ... An intensive course on the basis of modern brain research

Since nen are some good ideas in there, and exercises. Very "Scholastically" kept the Book.

PS2: And all of the time?? hear or read synonymous, in radio plays what you can learn a lot anyway, the storytelling of stories regards ;-)



Antwort von B.DeKid:

Concerning whether the effect because ..... Tip

Walking with or without commercials, the pillar of light and soft, leaking a little edge to Fractal Noise with this .... And in reference booklet can be found thousands of tattoo tribals and forms that can be used for the background.
And if you or jeneige of which has since taken on Vimeo - it uses "shining snowflakes Like Particles" - then you rather do 3 levels and use different speeds, lighting levels and turbulence settings .... in the overall picture, the natural look ;-)

Always turn our thinking A. Kraemer synonymous shows just basics ;-) That can only serve as an incentive to understand the function.



Antwort von 02VideoFaBI:

"B. DeKid" wrote:
Concerning whether the effect because ..... Tip

Walking with or without commercials, the pillar of light and soft, leaking a little edge to Fractal Noise with this .... And in reference booklet can be found thousands of tattoo tribals and forms that can be used for the background.
And if you or jeneige of which has since taken on Vimeo - it uses "shining snowflakes Like Particles" - then you rather do 3 levels and use different speeds, lighting levels and turbulence settings .... in the overall picture, the natural look ;-)

Always turn our thinking A. Kraemer synonymous shows just basics ;-) That can only serve as an incentive to understand the function.

Exactly, there is a tutorial about this on videocopilot.net ...


Back to the film:

Now I have heard some criticisms and have therefore (on the homepage of a survey; + comments), established in you can tell us "What you s.besten fandet" And what we "should consider the next time more." Would be glad if a few people to vote ..

>> TO THE SURVEY


Of course you can still synonymous happy to write detailed reviews, which will surely help more than a survey that offers only one possibility ...




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