Frage von stofflovsky2:
Hello,
here a preliminary trailer for our current documentary project "First Try"
criticism I would be delighted.
Easy Up Trailer (12MB/3MB) dial and off you go.
If the trailer is not running, you need the latest QuickTime Player.
www.firsttry-derfilm.de
Regards
Denis
Antwort von dotterbart:
thumbsup
very good. except perhaps the ton, a tick may be better, everything is perfect. my 2 cents. glückwunsch.
Antwort von *the.jokeR*:
of synonymous to me just a lob. gennerell well, however, the average, where zb. the first time the interviewed agree with the "choppy" is. because it is still the villeicht ton rausblenden ... otherwise very good!
Antwort von stofflovsky2:
Thank you first ...
At the sound has to be still be used. The trailer was first and foremost for the sponsors cut. Since everything had to go quickly, we sound a bit neglected. This is still improving. How do you because the trailer content? If he want to film?
Antwort von rush:
So I think the trailer managed synonymous ...
ton even find the good, ie the o-sounds are acoustically well-being, but almost too dry;) I miss just a bissl participate in the atmo .. you so'n skateboard hears times roll ... typical noises halt by driving / could jump in some passages come good ...
content haut ton of the penultimate me a little out, ie with the better ... I think you can forgo synonymous drauf:)
otherwise it next! :)
Antwort von dookie201:
Good work, I like super.
Antwort von Axel:
Good reared. Because, although the topic is very specific, and as for me, rather in the artistic category and includes sport injuries, I could after the trailer imagine the movie.
Antwort von stofflovsky2:
Thank you for your comments. I am pleased by the trailer as well and ...
Premiere is also the end of summer and the whole is about 40min long.
Regards
Denis
Antwort von stephan_o:
Hi,
I think the trailer super. The music is perfectly chosen, the pictures are great and the cut is aufm point.
The clip makes you want more.
Only the text flashes are my "default". Then you could more rausholen if perhaps a little more "dirty" would be.
Otherwise, really sharp!
Antwort von derpianoman:
Hi Dennis,
Wow, I can only say. Echt super!
As you can (I) is still a lot of learn.
Hats off and good luck with the search for sponsors
and the completion of the film!
Klaus
Antwort von transsib:
Supergeil! I have the same 3x Trailer views.
:-D
Good luck!
Gruß, Oliver
Antwort von stofflovsky2:
Hello s.Alle,
our film is finished and celebrates s.28.11.08 to 21.00 in the Film Club 813 (http://filmclub813.intercoaster.de/) in Cologne premiere. The team and the protagonists are present and would be pleased if the shop is full.
more info and a new trailer available at: www.firsttry-derfilm.de
schöne Grüße,
Denis
