Frage von film3macher:
Who has time and desire, should look my new short film "Retry" anschauen. If only 6 minutes. In the stream, with about 15 MB (330 kB / s). The actors are poor, but I hope the message comes over. There's still a suitable site, with background information and many pictures.
With Retry I have many experiences, for example, which I'm not an actor. In the future, everything else, just want to look at whether I am the right way.
"Retry"
6 minutes
3 Rotate days
www.retry-themovie.de (-> Film)
Antwort von Chrissigorn:
Hi,
I think your film wonderfully implemented.
The theme comes across very well, I was honestly shocked when the guy has shot his buddy! Has sat!
The fact that the screen is colorful and the rest black and white, so I interpret that there is nothing important in the world for the computer freak there, as his killer games on the monitor. A very nice idea!
Is therefore synonymous dyed the house, while the pavement and everything around the house has faded? As a sign for "home-rumhocken"?
Good actors were not the Brüller but that was already in order.
The idea with the "Retry" - button is also awesome.
Suggestion for improvement: If the computer freak sees his new car, I would have slowly Color in the Picture 'to' leave. As a sign that he is happy and the computer is only incidental.
Conclusion: Great Short Film. Do you have the time away? I bet that has a good chance at the festival ...
Antwort von przy:
Hi,
I find it very synonymous total success. One thing has me very disturbed:
When the dialog looks PC Freak "felt" totally opposite s.seinem far right over. That would have much more in the direction of cam should I look.
otherwise very nice
Antwort von film3macher:
@ Chrissigorn:
Thank you for your detailed praise. Toll synonymous you've described in detail, exactly what you liked.
Exactly right, the red light of which it is illuminated, is to show how much he absorbed in his world is. Red is synonymous the Color of Blood, it radiates from brutality. But blood is synonymous life, live in the real world. Therefore, the color runs throughout the film. The house is an important stylistic device. It is outdoors in nature. The window makes the contact of the real world to the virtual world dar. This is only part of the Red House to see it is synonymous, it seems very unreal. Gefällt But with the setting looks correct Stylisch from.
Incidentally a good idea of you, it fits the onset Music synonymous better. But retry is now complete, because I do not want to tinker around on it more. Did the film synonymous been sent to various film festivals and also on the homepage Retry published. Now they have already seen sooo many because I want nothing more tuned change.
@ Guest:
Does're right, I did not even noticed. I was glad that he ever seriously Rübergucken remains. He has very often have to start to laugh. There is the little s.mir past squint to cope:)
Antwort von film3macher:
Now s.Montag (10.03.2008) runs at 18:00 in clock Retry Open Channel Ludwigshafen. Who has time and desire, can turn times. Then you can retry times in the full resolution vision.
Antwort von korl:
find the idea is very simple but very nice for a short film!
However, I understand that with the farbgebung not quite. Although it looks good, but has not consistently equal importance and it seems to me a little unmotivated. (when the effect of his claim may be)
Otherwise, I can only the tip of the direction given: if you "only" amateur actor, you prefer to text and to emphasize more on emotions set! text often hinders the play ...
but otherwise I find the very cool ... so next!
and great praise for the stylish side to the film!
